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=**Phase autobiography:**=


 * This essay is about **** my first girlfriend and **** what lesson did I learned through that experience. **

This final draft shows narration, voice and organization.

=** P **** ersuasive Essay: **= =** My essay talks about the issue of the depletion of the Earth's natural resources **** and what i think the solution is. **= My final draft consists of a respective formal tone organization of facts, statistics and reasoning and a very positive solution to my problem Thesis: In my opinion, the solution to the depletion of natural resources is to switch to renewable energy.

= = =MLA Research Paper: = I'm doing the Roman army in the Roman Republic and Empire. The research paper will analyze it's rise to power and it's involvement in the Empire's declination. The paper contains a very clear analysis and very organized information.



=Expository Cause-and-Effect Essay:=

Psycho. A true Hollywood golden film, inspired dozens to further perfect the "horror" genre of cinema My essay focuses on how the movie's cinematography effected our film culture and spawned a new genre: "Slasher films"

=Literature Analysis: //Before I Go to Sleep://= Christine Lucas, an amnesiac, struggles to cope with her life as she tries to remember the events that caused her amnesia. As she slowly remembers, she realizes that she is vulnerable to deception and she can't trust anyone. My theme analysis focuses on Deception and how one can be vulnerable to it.

=Historical Narrative:= Bloody Sunday in 1920 was a traumatizing event for the Irish people in the Irish War of Independence. My perspective is an IRA operative as he lives through that tragic day step by step.

=Defining a Concept= The concept that I'm explaining will be "alienation". A definition that describes the act of separating social classes and as a shield to defend against the status quo.

Second draft

Third draft :)

Final draft and bibliography

Gothic Literature: For this essay I would be analyzing the imagery of two Gothic masterpieces: The Masque of the Red Death by Edgar Allen Poe and The Minister's Black Veil by Nathaniel Hawthorne.

The Final Draft

=Editorial.= For this paper, I'm writing an editorial on why our school should have tolerance on non-PE uniform. The school should have more tolerance of having sports apparels in PE class.



This editorial is a critical one since our job is to debunk other editorials that my classmate made.

=Creative Writing.= This creative writing piece that I made is called "Within Walter" The synopsis is about a skeptical journalist called Ernest meets Walter, an individual with multiple personality, Ernest battles his inner cynicism as he faces this peculiar individual.

Here's the final draft, enjoy

=Sample Application Essays= Some students have background or story that is so central their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
 * Prompt 1.**



Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn?
 * Prompt 2**

Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?
 * Prompt 3**

Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What did you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?
 * Prompt 4**

Prompt 5
Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.